My Immortal with Commentary

Chapter 7. Bring me 2 life

No, bring me to life =^_^=

AN: wel ok u guyz im only writting dis cuz I got 5 god reviuws.

God has nothing to do with this, sweetheart. Also, who gave her good reviews?! Raven?

n BTW I wont rite da nxt chapter til I git TIN god vons! STO FLAMING OR ILL REPORT U!

I wonder how many thousand people she had to report.

Evony isn't a Marie Sue ok she isn't perfect SHES A SATANITS! n she has problemz shes depressed 4 godz sake!

She doesn't have problems. She isn't getting into fights with friends, because they just adore her, and if she would, she'd probably not get the blame. She's not getting bullied. No problems at school or with money. And why was she depressed again?

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Draco and I held our pale white hands with black nail polish as we went upstairs. I was wearing red Satanist sings on my nails in red nail polish (AN: c doez dat sound lik a Maru Sue 2 u?).

Yes.

I waved to Vampire. Dark misery was in his depressed eyes. I guess he was jealous of me that I was going out with Draco. Anyway, I went upstairs excitedly with Draco. We went into his room and locked the door. Then............

No. No. Noooooo!!!

We started frenching passively

Bonjour, mon amie! J'aime les croissants! That, ladies and gentlemen, is the only thing I learned after two years of French classes.

and we took off each others clothes enthusiastically. He felt me up before I took of my top. Then I took off my black leather bra

A leather bra? That must hurt a lot.

and he took off his pants. We went on the bed and started making out naked and then he put his boy's thingy in mine and we HAD SEX. (c is dat stupid?)

Two kids in a sandbox (Do not Google that. If your curiosity gets the best of you, don't say I didn't warn you).

"Oh Draco, Draco!" I screamed while getting an orgasm when all of a sudden I saw a tattoo I had never seen before on Draco's arm. It was a black heart with an arrow through it. On it in bloody gothic writing were the words............ Vampire!

So Harry and Draco dated before this?

I was so angry.

"You bastard!" I shouted angrily, jumping out of the bed.

"No! No! But you don't understand!" Draco pleaded. But I knew too much.

"No, you fucking idiot!" I shouted. "You probably have AIDs anyway!"

Dumb stereotype about homosexuals.

I put on my clothes all huffily and then stomped out. Draco ran out even though he was naked. He had a really big you-know-what but I was too mad to care. I stomped out and did so until I was in Vampire's classroom where he was having a lesson with Professor Snape and some other people.

"VAMPIRE POTTER, YOU MOTHERFUCKER!" I yelled.  

VAMPIRE POTTER, YOU DRACOFUCKER!