Can you tell me what you think?

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So it's late and I like to wright short stories when I can't sleep. Please don't steal this and make it into a story. But tell me if you want ME to make this into a story. Here it is. Please tell me your honset opinion. If you like it or not.

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3 seconds. 1. 2. 3. Here they come. Looking for me. Hunting me! Where do I hide? In a tree? I climb a tree and watch as they go running past. I stay quiet and look around. I see them continue to run deeper and deeper into the forest. Except one. The most dangerous and the scariest one. Yet the most attractive. Tall, blonde hair, blue eyes that can turn either black as night or as red as blood. But still attractive. He turns slowly looking up into the tree tops. His eyes connect with mine. I let out a scared gasp as he slowly starts walking to the tree. This is it I'm done for. He stops at the bottom of the tree. He starts to climb. That's when I decide to jump. But he catches me and puts me on the ground. He then tells me to run leaving me completely unharmed and walked away.

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