Reviewed by: yoyojd
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Title: Insanity: Explained
Author: YoThokiChan
Genre: Mystery, Thriller
My Review:
First, I found a few grammatical errors. A few confusing sentences and misplaced commas which are all fixable. The only real issue I had with it was that it was a little confusing because it jumped around a lot from place to place but it wasn't too hard to follow. So, I'd say maybe make an easier transition for the reader.
There is a huge vocabulary and great descriptions of everything from a bloody mess to skull mountains. I don't really know what I was expecting when I started the book but I wasn't expecting that. I was surprised in the best way possible.
In the description, you promised not to be cliche. Cliche is the total opposite of your story. I have never read anything like it before in my life. There is nothing in my library that I can even start to compare it to. It's different and that's a good thing.
The battle scenes are epic and the dialogue is interesting. To be honest, this would make a great video game. Wake up with no memory and find out your some epic ninja warrior dude? Yeah, total video game material.
I really have nothing negative to say about this one or anything really helpful that you can change. You're a wonderful writer. I'm jealous.
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