Author: animebabe15
Title: Strange
Genre: Teen fiction
Description:
"You and I, we're different you see."
Ellie always felt backwards.
But after an encounter with someone who has a similar predicament, Ellie starts to question her feelings towards her best friend.
Through an emotional rollercoaster, Ellie starts to be her true self.
No matter how much heartbreak, tears, and confusion awaits, in the end things will be okay. If it's not okay, it's not the end.
My review:
For there only being two chapters this story is incredible! I love the imagery and your word diction. I rather enjoy how you paint the picture for the readers. I think the biggest problem with this story is your spacing. There are almost no paragraphs everything is kind of jumbled together. This is a really easy fix!
I really enjoyed the memory of the two best friends when they were much younger and how much significance the umbrella had to the two girls. At times I would get confused who was the best friend. I would've liked a little more "detail" (that isn't the word I wanted to use. I can't think of it right now grrrr.) really allow the readers to feel what the main character is feeling don't hold back.
The plot is great and I can't wait to see how the characters develop. This story has so much potential and once you go through and clean it up a bit it'll be so amazing.
