te amo, louis tomlinson // on hiatus //

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would you guys prefer an authors note at the beginning of the chapter or the end or both bc when i'm reading i enjoy pretty much both but again i want you guys to have input on all this ya feel. lately i've been like so lazy so sometimes i say i'm writing but im actually just in bed staring at the screen and that usually goes on for an hour until i just close the laptop and stop trying. full honesty rn. so yeah i hope you guys like this chapter, i thought i would focus on giselle and cai but i was just like naaaah so i'm gonna focus on harry a bit because for those of you who read the authors note from last night he is quite mysterious and i haven't paid much mind to him. yup yup, enjoy guys :) ++++ also, i'm now basing emmas's appearance on emily rudd so yep ill put a picture in the media section :)

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harry's pov

i watched the smoke from my mouth curl around my face. i took another drag of the cigarette, simply not caring of my surroundings and the people coughing around me. i stood in this dark alley, watching scantily clad young women leaving with men, against their will may i add, blood curdling screams pounding in my ears. i heard gunshots and police car's wails. this is where i came from, i thought, i shouldn't come back to it. i left this for a reason. i coughed out and threw the cigarette on the floor, crushing it under my boot. i ran back to where i started, unsure of my surroundings. everything was dark but the screams were fading along with the sirens. i felt beads of sweat forming on my forehead and i fixated my eyes to a ratty building with chipping walls and i saw familiar black hair and a tall girl who was fighting off a burly man. her small fists punching against his chest. i felt my blood boiling and i ran to where they were. she caught my gaze and her eyes widened, before kicking the man in the groin. he snarled, whiskey and cigars clear on his breath, his yellow teeth chipping and i saw her wince as he pushed her up against the building. i sprinted to the man and pushed him down onto the floor. my fist collided with his jaw and i looked up and screamed "go!" at giselle. her black dress hit above her knees and she had on black boots with buckles that covered all the skin not covered by the dress. [http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=112285564] i saw mascara stains on her cheeks and bruises on her neck, and my anger got stronger. i landed a swift punch on the man's abdomen.

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okay i am so so so sorry for this excuse of a chapter but i will make it up tomorrow with some amazing laitlin moments okay okay. i wasn't gonna post this until tomorrow but i'm just gonna leave you guys hanging until tomorrow :) i still want to know if i should change her name.

[2.11.14 undergoing editing... voting is CLOSED, if i get comments asking for the name to be changed, i'm so so sorry but its hard enough changing all the chapters so im sorry]

1.caitlin [stays the same]

2.iris [rainbow]

3.lola [lady of sorrows]

tbh i love love love lola but i want you guys to comment what you like the most and i'll try my very best to go with what you all want. also comment what you wanna see more of, for example; harry and his past, giselle and her funky appearance in clinton [you'll learn more about this when harry confronts giselle] or more cute louis+caitlin moments just ask and you shall recieve ALSO i saw that i'm up to 355 reads idk if my computer is playing jokes with me but i am so incredibly happy about all of this, there was a point where i just didn't want to update and i had given up on the idea but again i will dedicated this to a dedicated, faithful reader giselle_4_lyf, and i've been dedicating these to her for a while but hey she really picked me up off my feet when i wasn't updating and that was kind of her because now i'm really into writing this again. thanks again because i really didn't think this story would have many reads but wow this is great. I LOVE YOU ALLLLLLLL---- and one more thing, i really don't like asking for votes but if you could vote for one or a few of your favorite chapters that would be so so so kind and i kind of need it but its all up to you, also if you read this story, try to interact because im always open for suggestions or even if you just wanna say hi ill

always answer you guys. you can find me on twitter at @hxrrywhatever or my instagram is @celiawhatever (i like that word) and idk i just don't know whos reading and itd be nice to know whos keeping up with me :) THANKS AGAIN