Fireflies

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Fireflies

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Fireflies

Author - @grace-full

Synopsis -

A runaway girl finds peace at home.

Review -

It's almost poetic, Kats perspective of the world. It was a heartfelt read, showing a child's innocence and imagination. You did a good job portraying Kats thoughts and feelings.

I loved how Imogen just went along with what Kat wanted to do, not stopping her. However knowing her well enough to know where she'd go and when she needed her. I think we could all use a friend like her.

I noticed some mistakes, but nothing a read through wouldn't fix.

Overall you have created something wonderful, thank you for sharing it with the world.

Thank you for the opportunity, and if you ever need anything else let me know.

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