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Night {The Elysian Odyssey Book 1}

Night

Author - @genny_ann

Synopsis -

Lyra, merely a human, is obviously immersed in Night--a world where the dark clouds one's mind and savage creatures appeal to one's fear. But there is a greater power bestowed upon the land of Night. A power that demands worship and destruction. A power so dark that even the souls of the Elysium wail for mercy.

The nefarious Night Goddess craves something more than just her throne. She yearns to be an idol that all will bow down to, that all will worship. And she will use her puppets to put forth destruction and make the dark even darker.

Lyra and her supernatural gang must venture on an odyssey through the perilous Elysian in order to stop the Queen's plan of making Night her own personal playground.

But will Lyra fear the dark? Or will she have the courage to confront the Night Goddess and her bantam puppets?

Review -

First of all, I absolutely loved how you had a list of characters with how to pronounce their names. I also loved how you designed the whole thing. Your little symbols and graphics made it look like a fantasy story.

Now once we get past all the embellishments, we find a wonderful tale. You made it very descriptive, which normally I wouldn't like, but you did it in a way that it made the reader feel as if they were there. There living and breathing the story, which I'm sure many would agree is a wonderful thing in a book.

As for errors, I didn't notice any, doesn't mean they aren't there, except your paragraphs are long. The paragraphs aren't long enough to be a problem though, just give it a read through and do what feels right for you.  

Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your book. As always let me know if you need anything else.