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Immune
Author - @AmyJohnsom895
Synopsis -
Within the walls of the compound, Jay makes stupid mistakes, mistakes even she doesn't understand, putting everyone inside at risk. All because she can't shoot someone. All because she misses the wind in her hair, the flowers on the hillsides, the sound of crickets at night. All because she's different, the only person untouchable by the Virus.
When the mistakes begin to duplicate, and a girl shows up who knows her name, everything begins to change in Compound 4.
Review -
Ok so first things first, you need do some editing. Grammar and spelling mistakes scare of readers. It doesn't matter if you've got a great story if it takes to long to figure out what your trying to say. Just give it a thorough read through and it should help tremendously.
Second thing, your paragraphs are longer than they need to be. You should start a new paragraph whenever these things change:
Time Person Place Topic
Hope that helps.
Other than that, I think if you fixed those issues you would have a great book. You have an interesting plot, who doesn't love zombies.
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