Things We Lose

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Things We Lose

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Things We Lose

Author - nerd-senpai

Synopsis -

I want to do great things but all I have are these stupid words.

Review -

First, I just want to say that all the poems are very lovely. They are well written and very powerful pieces. They make the reader feel something. Which is hard to do.

Especially when I am your audience.

Second, I just want to say that I'm not very good with poetry. I've never really cared for and most often find it hard to read. It generally bores me. But these didn't, that's how good they are.

Lastly, I can't give you any tips to improve your work like I usually do when I give a review. I can't because I don't know the first thing about poetry, and they already seem perfect to me. Not that they couldn't be improved, anything could always use work. If it doesn't require improvement than what's the point.

But you have a great series of poems here, and if you ever publish them into a book, let me know, I'd love to add them to my them to my collection. And these are definitely something I could see going somewhere and becoming popular. If you want them to of course.

Anyway I guess that's about it, I am awfully sorry about how long this review took. I said I was back a week ago and only published one review. Somethings came up and I let them get in the way of my work, I'll try to do better in the future, but I don't make any promises.

-Paige 🙂🙃🙂 ;

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