The Last Philosopher

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The Last Philosopher

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The Last Philosopher

Author - @NickfEast

Synopsis -

(Sorry for the unprofessional picture for the synopsis

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(Sorry for the unprofessional picture for the synopsis. I'm behind and trying to save time.)

Review -

Okay, so it definitely sounds like a philosopher wrote the synopsis. You're not one, are you? I wouldn't be surprised if you are. Might I make one teeny suggestion though?

Break your synopsis up into paragraphs. It would make it much easier to read. People tend to get bored and uninterested if the have to read a huge chunk of text without breaking.

So say the part where it's talking about how little one cared, make a new paragraph after that sentence. Basically whenever a new topic is introduced or a new problem, when something changes, make a new paragraph.

Okay so like Huom, no one would expect to find anything special from a first glance. However if one does decide to venture farther than your cover or synopsis they would be greatly surprised.

I'd have to say this is the most interesting and humorous, I hope you were going for humorous, book I've ever read. It's incredibly interesting, and very original. I've never seen or heard about anything quite like it.

I would definitely suggest this if I was giving out book recommendations.

Honestly I didn't notice any errors in the story as far as grammar or spelling. But to be honest I might have been to engrossed in the story to notice.

A good read through is always a good thing though, and you can never do it to often.

It's a shame that it only has 4K reads, it really is. I'd have to give the cover credit for that though, its a defiantly different cover and it's a bit blurry as well.

But you have a wonderful story, thank you so much for the opportunity. I'm sorry I took so long.

If you need anything else, don't be afraid to ask.

Paige 🙃🙂🙃 ;

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