Believing Again

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Believing Again

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Believing Again

Author - @IndigoJewl

Synopsis -

Yuna Ariana Stone, the lone Alpha Female at the age of twenty six. Amazingly efficient, she was able to make Crescent Stone Pack one of the most prominent packs in the western region of the states.

Although surrounded by her loving family, she can't help but reminisce about the past and what should have been.

Normally, most shifters find their mate at age eighteen, Yuna Stone did, but not long after he passed and everyone else pales in comparison to him.

Convinced that romance no longer exists for herself, she's dedicated her life to keeping her pack great and keeping her most precious promise.

Mason Alexander Charles, the 'spare' Beta of the infamous Emberson Pack which hails from the mid-western region of the country. The young shifter at the age of nineteen had been shipped to Crescent Stone Pack as a living peace offering due to their conflicting history.

Outdated methods of making peace, no sign of his other half, and social complications make Mason's life fairly difficult.

But once he's found her, he'll have to essentially re-teach her broken heart that love still exists, all while keeping in mind that he wasn't the only man in her life or in this case her only mate.

Review -

Ok so you took a completely heartless person and made her cry with the first chapter. Then you did it again with the second. I want you to know how hard that is, it's nearly impossible.

Your story is beautifully written, you can definitely feel Yuna's pain. You were able to write that so well, portray exactly what she is feeling and make the reader feel that as well.

Your synopsis is intriguing, you beautifully describe every emotion, and tell a wonderful story. A story about second chances, and how hard it is to move on from past experiences.

I know you told me that you are worried about the audiences reaction to your story, well if you were trying to write a powerful piece that draws the reader in, you have nothing to worry about.

Now as always a quick read through for mistakes is always a good idea. But you have a compelling story that will delight the masses.

Thank you for the opportunity, I loved reviewing your work and would be happy to review anything else for you.

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