Through Thick And Thin
Author - @-xyna-
"I have an idea though; a very crazy, harsh and unreasonable idea but still an idea."
Gretchen urged Phoebe to go on.
"Instead of searching for Paisley's ideal guy, who probably doesn't exist, what if we pay a guy to pretend like the perfect boyfriend to cheer her up?"
Silence.
"Are you kidding?"
Apparently Phoebe wasn't and this Project Boyfriend was born!
But add in drama, betrayal, a Pretend Boyfriend who can't tell left from right, and a whole lot of lying, the three best friends will soon realize things never go as plan.
Review -
Through Thick and Thin is quite the funny story, definitely something to read if you need a good laugh.
Gretchen and Phoebe are true friends, with good intentions, but they while entertaining I don't think a fake boyfriend is the right answer. I could definitely see this happening in the real world, however.
Now for the problems, you have quite a few spelling errors. I also noticed some grammatical mistakes as well. I'm sure a thorough read through would fix most of the issues.
Overall it's a great read, and I suggest it to anyone looking for a laugh. You just need to fix the issues I discussed and possibly redo your synopsis. The synopsis isn't bad I just feel that if you worked on it a little more you would attract more readers.
Thanks for the opportunity, I hope this helps with your writers block.
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