This is the SHORT STORY ENTRIES SECTION. All entries will be JUDGED ANONYMOUSLY.
Your entries will be judged by our Panel Judges with the following criteria:
(1) The Idea behind the Story - 20 Points
(2) Structure/Plot of the Story - 20 Points
(3)...
*Note: All reviews are based on my experience from Reading Critique Book Clubs, Reading Writing Tips from online. If ever my na offend man ako sa pag review sa entry, sorry, but my intention is not to hurt your feelings but to help you in your wirting passion through my knowledge about writing tips. Sana makatulong ang review kong 'to sa susunod na sasalihan niyo ng contest. <3
REVIEW:
Hi Miss/Mister Author! First of all, I would like to thank you for participating my First Ever Short Story Writing Contest! Salamat dahil sumali ka sa patimpalak na 'to. So here's a little bit review to your entry.
1.) Maganda 'yong title. Catchy siya. Unique ang title na ginamit mo. Parang puno ng hugot ang kwento.
2.) Maganda ang plot mo kaya lang parang naging mabilis ang pangyayari 'nung inamin na ni Kris na siya pala 'yong nag reject kay Kath. Parang kulang sa scenes.
3.) Hindi ko na visualize 'yong setting sa simula ng kwento, kung saan siya naka locate. Nakalimutan mong idescribe.
4.) Okay naman ang paggamit mo ng dialogue at nailagay mo sa tama ang mga bantas, kaya lang, 'yong sa part na may maraming conversation, pwede mong hindi na lagyan ng dialogue tag as long as alam ng readers kung sino-sino ang mga nagsasalita.
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5.) 'Yong sa conflict naman, wala akong nakita kasi ang meron sa story mo is 'yong inamin lang ni Kris. Ang akala ko is ibubully pa rin siya ni Kris sa ikalawang pagkikita nila.
6.) 'Yong style sa story mo ay dapat i-improve ng kaunti. Hindi naman siya necessary na kailangan talang unique lahat ng style. As long as marunong ka gumamit ng tamang salita sa pag describe ng mga scene or tamang paglalaro sa mga salita, magiging unique ang plot ng story mo at hindi ito magiging Cliche.
7.) All in all, you need to read more and more stories to get more ideas and strategy in writing. May potential ka sa pagsusulat as long as you are passionate and you are willing to learn. Mas lalong lalawak ang imahinasyon mo kapag magbabasa ka ng maraming libro or storries. Just keep up the good work! Don't stop writing! Godbless! Sana ay makatulong ang review na 'to kahit papano. <3
SCORE
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*Note: All reviews are based on my experience from Reading Critique Book Clubs, Reading Writing Tips from online. If ever my na offend man ako sa pag review sa entry, sorry, but my intention is not to hurt your feelings but to help you in your wirting passion through my knowledge about writing tips. Sana makatulong ang review kong 'to sa susunod na sasalihan niyo ng contest. <3
