👬 A Strong Desire for Oliver 👬

Hi, "A Strong Desire for Oliver" is my first story at hindi po ako ganun kagaling when it comes to writing a story. Sinubukan ko lang po kung makakagawa ako with my own knowledge and also to try kung gaanu kalawak ang imagination ko. If you have any negative comments or any suggestions please feel free to write it. I would be happy to know about it because it will help me to broaden my knowledge how to improve my writing skill and also to know if you like the story or what not however still hoping that you will like it.

"A Strong Desire for Oliver" is a story about a man who fell in loved with his friend with the same sex. Stephen and Oliver studied at the same university. They used to hangout together with their friends and they are very close to each other. They met each other because of their common friend his name is John. John is Stephen's bestfriend in college and he knew everything about Stephen also its sexual preference however he accepted Stephen to became his bestfriend without any hesitation. John introduced Stephen to Oliver and they also became good friends. Until one day everything changed because of what happened.

"Tiger Lily"

We drive tonight,
and you are by my side.
We're talking about our lives,
like we've known each other forever.
The time flies by,
with the sound of your voice.
Its close to paradise,
with the end surely near.
And if I could only stop the car
and hold onto you,
and never let go (and never let go)
I'll never let go (I'll never let go)
as we round the corner
to your house
you turned to me and said,
I'll be going through withdrawal of you
for this one night we have spent."
And, i want to speak these words
but i guess i'll just bite my tongue,
and accept "someday, somehow"
as the words that we'll hang from.

And i (i..), I don't want to speak these words.
'cause i ('cause i..), I don't want to make things any worse.
And i (i..), I don't want to speak these words.
'cause i, i don't want to make things any worse.

Why does tonight, have to end?
Why don't we hit restart,
and pause it at our favorite parts.
We'll skip the goodbyes.
If i had it my way,
I'd turn the car around and runaway,
just you and i.

And I(i..), I don't want to speak these words.
'cause I ('cause i..), I don't want to make things any worse. (any worse)
And I (i..), I don't want to speak these words
'cause I, I don't want to make things
and I, I don't want to make things any worse.

@iamphen_nelope