Judged by
NormallEmma & AzraJazzmyn & gritikanojia
Winners:
gritikanojia
Next Door Singer
By glxdyyss
Wrath of Aphrodite
By Cky1208
NormallEmma
The Killer Instinct: Carrie Unleash
By LunarAquarius
Forced To Love You
By AbigailHunt2
Venus
By Live_Life_With_Books
Spring Day — j |jk| ✔️
By SupahNinja34
AzraJazzmyn
HANDWRITTEN | VINCENT ZHOU
By Sonenclaire
Bed Of Roses | Blackpink Chaennie FanFiction
By GrapeBatteriesInc
Book: The Killer Instinct: Carrie Unleash
Author: LunarAquarius
Judge: NormallEmma
Summary: 10/10
Grammar: 8/10
Spelling: 10/10
Punctuation: 9/10
Originality: 10/10
Total: 47/50
Review:
It was a very nice book, I enjoyed reading it. I like the bits of dark humour and your descriptions were incredibly vivid. The video you added helped me with some background on what is going on, I'm not familiar with this fandom. While reading, I found some grammar mistakes here and there. Also, you have a small problem with choosing the right word for your sentence and how to connect it. Lastly, your writing style was simple. Too simple, it made me zone out a couple of times from the story world and characters to reality as a reader. So, I think a bit of improvement you can get this problem solved.
Book Title: Forced To Love You
Author: AbigailHunt2
Judge: NormallEmma
Summary: 6/10
Grammar: 9.5/10
Spelling: 10/10
Punctuation: 10/10
Originality: 10/10
Total: 43.5/50
Review:
In my opinion, you need to write a summary that gives the readers an idea of what they're about to dive into. Next, I found one grammar mistake but it wasn't a big deal. I think you were haven't a second thought while writing. However, your spelling is great I didn't find any mistakes. Other than that, your book was good and I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.
Book Title: His Mermaid Her Unicorn
Author: jillyjuice
Judge: NormallEmma
Summary: 6/10
Grammar: 7/10
Spelling: 10/10
Punctuation: 7/10
Originality: 10/10
Total: 40/50
Review:
You need to write a summary to give your readers an idea of what they're about to dive into. Next, your paragraphs need to shorten a bit, it was hard for me to pick up where I left due to the length. Your grammar needs a little bit of work and it will be great. Also, I found some missing commas. Other than that, it was a great a book and I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.
Book Title: The Ice Kingdom (jelsa)
Author: blueberrycupcake41
Judge: NormallEmma
Summary: 9/10
Grammar: 8/10
Spelling: 10/10
Punctuation: 8/10
Originality: 10/10
Total: 45/50
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