Judge: PositivelyEating
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Misjudged
By Karren
Into the Night
By JillyJuice
Author: Karren
Title: Misjudged
Genre: Short Story
Summary: 6/10
Grammar: 10/10
Spelling: 10/10
Punctuation: 10/10
Originality: 10/10
Total: 46/50
Review:
This is a very good book, by fit isn't made for short story. It is a poetry book and should stay on that lane. I found it harder to judge because of this reason, but I tried and can say this very well written. I have no complaints, except that this should be in the Poetry category and I think it's a bit unfair for it to be counted as Short Story, but just my thoughts. Good book and very well written...
Author: MaybeMagical
Title: Entwined
Genre: Short Story
Summary: 8/10
Grammar: 8/10
Spelling: 10/10
Punctuation: 8/10
Originality: 7/10
Total: 41/50
Review:
This one is a poetry book and I don't think it should be in short story, but it is very well written and although it got a bit boring, due to the lack of action, it still kept me reading. The format could be a lot better and sentences tend to get too long. Shorten sentences and turn them into tinier sentences would work a lot better. Otherwise good book.
Author: jillyjuciee
Title: Into The Night
Genre: Short Story
Summary: 6/10
Grammar: 8/10
Spelling: 10/10
Punctuation: 8/10
Originality: 10/10
Total: 42/50
Review:
An idea for the summary would be a summary for one of your short story. Give the reader an idea of what they are about to dive into. There where missing commas and unnessary words mixed in there, but nothing big. Keep up the good work and I love the little short stories, they were very interesting.
Author: Lil_Cutipiee
Title: Short Story(Horror)
Genre: Short Story
Summary: 5/10
Grammar: 6/10
Spelling: 7/10
Punctuation: 6/10
Originality: 8/10
Total: 32/50
Review:
I like the concept and the stories were good, but they were littered with mistakes. There were missing commas and periods. There wasn't enough description to make me feel scared. There were bad format and bad word choices. Also the dialogue was off: Do: "I like pizza," John said.Don't: "I like pizza." John said.Do: John said," I like pizza."Don't: John said. "I like pizzaRevise it and you should be good. I like the base of the story though.
Author: sydsnation
Title: 3,702 Miles
Genre: Short Story
Summary: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10
Spelling: 8/10
Punctuation: 7/10
Originality: 6/10
Total: 36/50
Review:
Good story, but it's a bit cliché. There should be more descriptions to elaborate on the main characters emotions. If feel more information could be put on each character. They seem like best friends, but they are kissing each other on the second chapter. Other than very good story.
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