TeenFiction Results And Winners

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Judged by
Spriha1211 & 1SassyWolf & NutUp_or_shutUp

Winners

NutUp_or_shutUp
Not The Only One
By eternalfelicity
Blaire
By UV_Writes

Spriha1211
The Girl Under The Hood
By veeehrt
Everything I Am Not
By ttrriisshhhhhhh

1SassyWolf
Just One More Scoop
By Shanz07
Drowning
By tyragathers

Spriha1211

Name: Before clock strikes
Author:ar_ya_writes
Judge: Spriha1211

Summary :8/10
Grammar : 9/10
Spelling : 10/10
Punctuation : 8/10
Originally :7/10
Total : 42/50

Review:

    The book has a smooth storyline and sort of unique plot but the development of plot is cliché.As, usual first day at new school, the first girl the protagonist meets becomes her best friend. We seriously need to leave this only plot development and find a new one.Tje story is written in present tense so yes, it's a change from usual ones but use of too many acronyms just makes it super casual. Try using less acronyms.

Name: Everything I am not
Author: ttrriisshhhhhhh
Judge: Spriha1211

Summary : 7/10
Grammar : 9/10
Spelling : 10/10
Punctuation : 9/10
Originality: 9/10
Total : 44/50

Review:

    The grammar is impeccable and so is the storyline. We don't come across a good book too often because of increasing number of cliché books. But this one is very nice. You have a very beautiful way of describing things and a nice vocabulary. I loved the book

Name : The Girl Under The Hood
Author: veeehrt
Judge: Spriha1211

Summary : 9/10
Grammar :9/10
Spelling: 10 /10
Punctuation :9/10
Originally :9/10
Total : 46/50

Review:

    The book is simply wow! It supports a powerful story line with a romance in background. It's one of those book that does not support heroism in just men, it's the book which empowers the female and personifies them as real Heros.The Grammar is also good, a few mistakes here and there in sentence formation is observed but they are so minor that they can be ignored.Although the writing style of author is too casual.

Although the writing style of author is too casual

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