Adventure Results And Winners

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Judged by
Pinkainfinity & huzailazahid

Winners:

huzailazahid
The sentinel
By mahana258
Where no road leads
By Kndlntsva

Pinkainfinity
The Skarlette Letter
By RaeCain219
The Flip
By Karran


Pinkainfinity

Book Title: Skarlette letter
Author:RaeCain219
Judge: Pinkainfinity

Summary 7/10
Grammar 10/10
spelling 9/10
punctuation 9/10
originality 6/10

Review:

    This book started out really well! I loved the way you described Skarlette, and wrote the action scenes. First person perspective is hard to pull off, you did a great job!

Book Title: Masked killer
Author: Crystal_Rose_Angel
Judge:Pinkainfinity

Summary 7/10
Grammar 4/10
spelling 8/10
punctuation 2/10
originality 8/10

Review:

    The punctuation in this book could use some improvement. A very obvious mistake, which is the spaces before punctuation marks. I do like the way you set up this story!

Book Title: The flip
Author: Karran
Judge: Pinkainfinity

Summary 9/10
Grammar 10/10
spelling 10/10
punctuation 9/10
originality 8/10

Review:

    Beautifully written! I love the war theme, and how it kicked off right away. Super underrated. And I love the unique layout of the chapters!

 And I love the unique layout of the chapters!

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huzailazahid

Book name : The sentinel
Author: mahana258
Judge: huzailazahid

summary : 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Spelling :10/10
Originality : 10/10
Punctuation : 10/10
Total: 48/50

Review:

The story was amazing. I loved how the plot was set up and how you covered every character's POV while keeping it to one. the grammar and the use of common words in a twisted way had me shook . Keep up the good work.

Book name : The Crossing Destinies
Author: Witto150
Judge: huzailazahid

Summary: 8/10
Grammar: 8/10
Spelling : 9/10
Punctuation: 8/10
Originality: 7/10
Total: 40/50

Review:

The book was interesting. The plot was gripping. The only draw back was the number of author notes and chapters that you put before the actual story was cringing . I would've to pass through number of these thank you notes, dedication and the awards before starting the story. I'd suggest you to decrease these all chapters into one or two, no more than that. Otherwise the book is quite good . Keep up the work!

Book name: where no road leads
Author: Kndlntsva
Judge: huzailazahid

Summary: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Spelling : 10/10
Punctuation: 8/10
Originality: 10/10
Total: 46/50

Review:

The book was so inviting. I loved how you switched between POV's and placed a clear and full description of the facts and how you describe Anya's life while explaining the world it seemed to her. Hardly anyone has the ability to do so and it was so good to read it. Your book needs recognition as it's amazing. Keep up the good work.

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