Judged by Angel-Yusa &!CrazyGirl19786
Angel-Yusa
Forgotten
By RavenWolf999
CrazyGirl19786
The crime in Callahan's Morrow
By MeredithAll
Not Fallen... Yet
By DeliaMaguire6
Book title: Forgotten
Author: RavenWolf999
Judge: Angel-Yusa
Summary: 7/10
Grammar: 9/10
Punctuation: 9/10
Spelling: 10/10
Originality: 5/10
Review:
Even though grammar and Punctuation and spelling are good, the story sequence, at least at the beginning, was boring. You used the 'this happened, then that happened' kind of sequence. You really have to work on that.
Book Title: Death to Get
Author: _Angel19Queen_
Judge: Angel-Yusa
Summary: 7/10
Grammar: 7/10
Punctuation: 7/10
Spelling: 10/10
Originality: 8/10
Review:
Even though there were a few mistakes, your story had potential. It's a shame that those mistakes clouded the beauty of your idea.
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Book Title: The Devil's Story
Author: rajaaniruddh
Judge: CrazyGirl19786
Summary - 9/10
Spelling - 8 /10
Grammar - 8/10
Punctuation - 8/10
Originality - 8/10
Review:
It needs a bit more work as it failed to lure me in. More figures of speech and better grammar could have been used. Also, the writer's style really needs to improve.
Book Title: The Crime In Callahan's Morrow
Author: MeredithAll
Judge: CrazyGirl19786
Summary - 10/10
Spelling - 8/10
Grammar - 10/10
Punctuation - 10/10
Originality - 10/10
Review:
It was absolutely intriguing and enthralling. Loved the plot although better adjectives could have been used.
Book Title: Not Fallen... Yet
Author: DeliaMaguire6
Judge: CrazyGirl19786
Summary - 10/10
Spelling - 9/10
Grammar - 9/10
Punctuation - 9/10
Originality - 10/10
Review:
It was an alright story. I would prefer more figures of speech.
Book Title: Natasha The First Hybrid
Author: Queen_Kim247
Judge: CrazyGirl19786
Summary - 10/10
Spelling - 8 /10
Grammar - 10/10
Punctuation - 8/10
Originality - 10/10
Review:
Would love to read more of the story. And the plot lured me in.
Book Title: Reincarnation
Author: NicoleRxldxn
Judge: CrazyGirl19786
Summary - 8/10
Spelling - 10 /10
Grammar - 9 /10
Punctuation - 9/10
Originality - 9/10
Review:
Its OK. More figures of speech, better writing style and a bit more creativity is required.
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