Fantasy Results And Winners

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Judged by
shalumenon12 & Awesomegal3015 & NormallEmma

Winners

Awesomegal3015
How Her Hair Turned Red
By jillyjuicee
White Thorn
By illenisThorn

NormallEmma
The Scribe's Battle
By Lydz99
Queen On Fire
By Dark_Writes

shalumenon12
Agent 34 and the desert of the beast
By Astrabar
Extinction
By ElijahCole11

shalumenon12

Book Title: FANTASY
Author: _Christy97_
Judge: shalumenon12

Summary: 6
Grammar: 7
Spelling: 9
Punctuation: 7
Originality: 8
Total: 37/50

Review:

    the book was good , it still has lot of scope for improvement. something that I would specifically mention is beginning of new paragraph, some began from centre whereas some from left . there must be consistency there.

Book Title: Fireborn
Author: Queen_Aphrodite
Judge: shalumenon12

Summary: 6
Grammar: 8
Spelling: 9
Punctuation: 8
Originality: 8
Total:39/50

Review:

    Nice to have a strong female characterA suggestion would be to have more details about it character

Book Title: Extinction
Author: ElijahCole11
Judge: shalumenon12

Summary: 7
Grammar: 9
Spelling: 9
Punctuation: 7
Originality: 9
Total: 41/50

Review:

    loved this book , everything from various characters to storyline

Book Title: Silver Wings
Author: Fennkin52
Judge: shalumenon12

Summary: 7
Grammar: 7
Spelling: 8
Punctuation: 7
Originality: 7
Total: 36/50

Review:

    I would suggest to slow the pace of Ur book and try to shorten your paragraph.i actually liked the concept of dragons

Book Title: Agent 34 And The Desert Of Beasts
Author: Astrabar
Judge: shalumenon12

Summary: 8
Grammar: 8
Spelling: 9
Punctuation: 8
Originality: 9
Total: 42/50

Review:

    I really liked the summary , it made me wanted to read .

    I really liked the summary , it made me wanted to read

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