Judged by CrazyForBunnys
Winners
The Winchester [ON HOLD]
By Brielavedo
I'll Be Fine
By Beyond_The_Covers
Book Title: The Secrets of Evalas
Author: Flourish069
Total: 32/50
Summary: 5/10
There was almost no detail. And i still didn't understand what the story was about.
Grammar: 8/10
Minamal mistakes.
Spelling 9/10
Next to no spelling errors.
Punctuation: 2/10
Countless mistakes, I filled more than 2 pages (in small writing) with punctuation errors, on just 3 chapters.
Originality: 6/10
I have read a couple of things along these lines, but nothing the exact same.
Review:
2/3 chapters that I read did not have paragraphs, and the one that did, the paragraphs were unreasonably long. The punctuation was not very good at all in this book, and I only saw It used correctly about 5 times.
Book Title: The Winchester
Author: Brielavedo
Total; 40/50
Summary; 6/10
A few mistakes, and it was like an entire story! Wayyyyy to long!
Grammar; 8.5/10
Minimal mistakes
Spelling; 8/10
almost no spelling mistakes a few missing words, or auto corrected words
Punctuation; 9.5/10
Very few mistakes
Originality; 8/10
There is a movie based on a similar topic. I have read a few books about things like this as well
Review:
great story! They had many details makin it an interesting story. At the beginning it was a little cleshay not going to lie, but at the beginning/ middle of the second chapter, it took a big plot twist, which was very interesting to follow! I am definitely going to continue reading this book! (Once I'm done judging)
Book Title: I Hear You
Author: WTF_isthis
Total: 43.5/50
Summary; 8/10
To long, but detailed and well written
Grammar; 9/10
Minimal mistakes
Spelling; 9/10
Almost no mistakes
Punctuation; 8/10
Minimal mistakes
Originality; 9.5
Never read anything like this befrore! Good job author!
Review:
I really really like this book, it is very interesting and intriguing. I can't wait to read more from this author! There was so much creativity and thought put into this book and it shows how much this person enjoys writing! I aspire to be like the people who can write so well!
Book Title: I'll Be Fine
Author: Beyond_The_Covers
Total; 41/50
Summary; 8/10
Very long, but correct with grammar, spelling ect
Punctuation; 8/10 Minimal mistakes
Spelling; 9/10 Very few mistakes
Grammar; 7/10 A couple of simple mistakes
Originality; 9/10 Never read anything like this (and I don't give 10/10 if u didn't notice cause nothing can be perfect)
Review:
I really liked this book, and it made me blush, giggle, and smile when the charters did. The conversations between the characters was very actuate given their age group (Teenagers), and I could easily visualize the scenes. The middle/begging of the story was a little hard to follow, and the author did one of the things that I dislike most about certain books... they killed a character for no apparent reason. This is still a very VERY good boom and I think it has a good chance in this competition.
Book Title: The Entry Book
Author: Angel-Yusa
Total; 31.5/50
Summary; 4/10 The summary was bland and misleading. Decent Length.
Grammar; 7/10 Many small mistakes
Spelling; 9/10 Few mistakes
Punctuation; 5/10 Many mistakes throughout the story
Originality; 6.5/10 I've seen many things like this before
Review:
It was a bit repetitive and after a little while of reading I was able to predict what will happen next. The first chapter felt incomplete, but the next felt more developed. The story lacked intensity, but with a clear end goal, I could see this story having a good chance among many books.
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