Author of the story is LexieStretton
Learning to love is story composed so far of small chapters discussing a girls journey through the impossible to understand thing called love. Filled with awkwardness and humor that'll probably make you reminisce on your school days, or cringe at the memories they hold. While the chapters aren't very long, they are really well written and I think you should go check it out.
This segment is mainly for the author to see what I had to say while reading their story, feel free to look through it, maybe it'll help encourage you to check out the full thing.
Prologue : The story starts off with something I'm sure most can relate to, that awkward moment of trying to be romantic to your crush. Never works out. This is a good start, and I'm interested in seeing more. As far as I can see there was no mistakes with your writing, no spelling mistakes or grammatical flaws as far as I know. So good on you.
Ch. 1 : Bruh, with ten dollars you could get yourself two grinders from subway, but nah she goes to chinese restaurant to spend all her ten dollars on probably a box of four chicken fingers cause chinese food is expensive as can be :D This chapter was also really good and light hearted, and the humor was pretty good. I didn't think I'd see Fortnite get mentioned in a story, but I guess I can scratch that off the list of things I've read. You had no mistakes, and it was a nice little read. You could almost feel the upcoming awkwardness of the situation.
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