Author of the story is Manwithoutpurpose
Considering this is a one shot, I'll be condensing everything into one paragraph about the chapter.
Sleepless is a one shot romance story, more or less. It diverges from what you'd typically think would be within a romance story for a more wholesome moment instead of the "let's bang like two rabbits in heat" approach others do. Making the story kind of stand a bit on its own. It has a sort of script play writing stile, where the characters names are displayed before what they say. I don't normally see people using this form of writing, so it was interesting to say the least. The author also uses images and even a song to help the story along. Of course, there are minor typos and grammar issues, but as far as I'm aware the author said they know of them. There is some humor and odd moments amongst the two characters, but in the end I believe the story is giving an uplifting message. (I'm not going to elaborate on that message though cause that would spoil) I don't really know what to suggest for the story, as it kind o just works with how it is already. Give the story a read yourself and see how you feel, I thought it was quite good myself.
Side Note: I think there is some future stories or something being hinted at from this one shot. Who knows though.
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