Author of the story is be_butterfly
Rain is a short story about the moment when two guys fell in love. Or I mean, when they admitted it to each other. It has good writing and is actually a really nice story in general, there were little to no mistakes within it, as I found only two.
Here they are:
You mess up Andie at the start and say Aundie. You say ran when you should say run when you say "ran up and down through the other boy's slim body" Besides these I couldn't find anything else that was odd.
Besides these, the story doesn't do a bad job at expressing the love the two have for eachother. I won't go to in detail, in order to not spoil the story. But if you like to read romance and enjoy LGBT stories, this is a really nice short read for you. So go check it out.
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