What’s up readers? Since my user is so~ long, just call me Sol. Anyway, I’m one of many amazing reviewers of the Crown Credits, QuoteV’s Magazine. Let’s get this started. Any questions, message me.
My Cousin’s Your Fan-girl (Modern! Sasuke x Reader)
Okay. So this story is pretty simple in the beginning. Obviously, it’s a Naruto fanfic, so~ put that in your mind. It’s in the reader’s point of view, so you put your name, or any name in the slot and start reading. The reader (you) is a cousin to Sakura, and a gamer to the core.
Far as the story tells, you move in with her after your parents went on a yearlong business trip. You went to live with Sakura and obviously, if you pay attention to anything about Naruto, she clearly likes Sasuke. You get told to not fall for him, and at first, you don’t.
You start hanging out with Sasuke, without Sakura knowing, and you find that he is a MAJOR gamer… and a cheater. OuO Sasuke, you cheater. Anyway, he starts having you come over. He cooks for you and you play games. Soon, you start to have feelings for this fellow gamer. What will you do?
Typos and Whatnot
Honestly, I only found some basic typos. The wrong word that sounds the same, like ‘no’ and ‘know’, or forgetting a letter, like ‘no’ instead of ‘now’. Not many typos.
Characters
Just your usual Naruto characters with a few others. One of these is the reader (you). You look any way you want, but you have long hair in the beginning and later on, short hair, due to circumstances.
Then there’s Ryuu. He was your caretaker, and while not related to you, something of a brother.
Other Nonsense I Feel Like Telling You
Generally, the grammar of the story is about normal. The detail/description of a few things were good. I saw no problem there. I personally like this story. I may not be a fan of Naruto, anime or characters, but this story deserves a round of applause.
As for suggestions? Keep it up.
Sol
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