Eclipse of the Worlds: @Linneae_Liam
Title of Book: Eclipse of the Worlds
Author: @Linneae_Liam
Judge: @edith_snow
Title/Book Cover: 7/10
Grammar: 9/10
Tone of Voice: 28/30
Characters: 16/20
Overall Content: 26/30
Added Points: 5/10
Total Score: 91/100
Basic Review: I think your cover was pretty nice, although the title would be bigger. The grammar was good, I definitely didn't have a problem with anything in particular. I loved the tone of voice and some of the description you used because it was so clear and vivid. However, the characters were kind of generic. The actual fantasy part of it was really good though, which is why I added five points. Lastly, I wanted to mention your structure because I really liked its creativity and uniqueness.
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