Minsdrelle Saga: The Dark Queen: @VismayVairagi
Title: Minsdrelle Saga: The Dark Queen
Author: @VismayVairagi
Judge: @OptimisticSuffering
Title/Book Cover: 10/10
Grammar: 8/10
Tone of Voice: 27/30
Characters: 15/20
Overall Content: 26/30
Added Points: 4/10
Total Score: 89/100
Basic Review: I really love your cover, the colors don't clash, and I really think the way you placed your book title username and other necessities on the space without making it look too crowded looks very attractive. Your grammar was almost perfect, you just added a lot of commas where they didn't belong. Which made some of the sentences look over crowded and shopping. I love your characters, and how their interactions caused them to grow and develop, I just think you could have chose better names to bring more seriousness to your book. Overall your story is amazing and I think that you did a good job writing! Keep up the good work!
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