Under the Spotlight: @FutabaSakura97
Title of Book: Under the Spotlight
Author: @FutabaSakura97
Judge: @edith_snow
Title/Book Cover: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10
Tone of Voice: 27/30
Characters: 17/20
Overall Content: 27/30
Added Points: 5/10
Total Score: 91/100
Basic Review: I think you should make the story cover less bright, maybe just choose one of those colors on it and stick to that color scheme. There are some spelling and punctuation mistakes that could use editing. It seems like you lost interest with the story as it went on and you started putting less and less effort into it. I loved what you had in the very start of the story, I just think the rest should have that as well.
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