The Girl Who Fell Below: @MiriBoone
Title of Book: The Girl Who Fell Below
Author: @MiriBoone
Judge: @edith_snow
Title/Book Cover: 7/10
Grammar: 7/10
Tone of Voice: 24/30
Characters: 14/20
Overall Content: 21/30
Added Points: 1/10
Total Score: 74/100
Basic Review: The cover could HSE a better font and less tacky colors (maybe just a pale grey or white). I'm not going to sugar-coat this, but the realism was poor. The characters are incredibly cliché - they should have more personality than the quiet girl who is smart and lives a hard life, or the bubbly best friend who takes no time for herself because she's always only there for the main character. And Marcy's character is very unrealistic in that NOBODY would say those things to her in front of the whole school, not that bluntly... especially in front of the whole school (or at least her class). teachers would never allow, even where I live (unless it's in a corny 80's movie). I'd try to make the beginning more creative and realistic before adding the rest. The idea is definitely unique and it holds so much potential, just work on how you execute it.
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