Tales of a Teenage Insomniac: @qaxela
Title of Book: Tales of a Teenage Insomniac
Author: @qaxela
Judge: @edith_snow
Title/Book Cover: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Tone of Voice: 28/30
Characters: 18/20
Overall Content: 27/30
Added Points: 5/10
Total Score: 96/100
Basic Review: I liked your cover because it was simple but said enough. The grammar was pretty good, there was just a few typos but I still got what you were saying. I loved your first part because it was such a great hook, the prologue itself was enough to draw me in. Overall, your style was extremely well-developed and sophisticated, and I think your story was really nice. The only thing I'd recommend, at least for stories in the future, is to kind of try to avoid clichés (for example, the main character that loves going to the library to read for an escape with a perfect GPA). It'll make your story stand out even more. Good job, I hope this helped out a little bit!
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