The Text: @HillbillieNolan
Title: The Text
Author: @HillBillieNolan
Judge: @OptimisticSuffering
Title/Book Cover: 5/10
Grammar: 6/10
Tone of Voice: 25/30
Overall Content: 19/30
Added Points: 2/10
Total Score: 70/100
Basic Review: All in all the story felt really rushed, there wasn't that much character development, and the cover really didn't do that great of a job of reflecting the powerful statement you were trying to make. That doesn't mean I don't like the idea you were giving to us, I just feel like you could have done a better job executing it. The idea in itself is pretty unique, and you could build off of it well. It is always good to read a story telling you 'suicide isn't the only way to go,' but if you were planning to rewrite the story here are a few things I would suggest. Slowing down the plot, and adding more character development, adding more realism, having more character dialogue, and making the story more then a single chapter. Good luck in the future!
-Side Note: The review was done by OptimisticSuffering but we're still using the score gamergurlunite wrote so that it's more fair since they agreed on what you could improve on and what you did well.
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