Being Pretty is Dangerous: @Zareena08
Title of Book: Being Pretty is Dangerous
Author: @Zareena08
Judge: @gamergurlunite
Title/Book Cover: 6/10
Grammar: 8/10
Tone of Voice: 26/30
Characters: 17/20
Overall Content: 25/30
Added Points: 0/10
Total Score: 82/100
Basic Review: Story idea is definitely unique and hold lots of potential - Maybe it has some metaphor behind it other than the title and/or it's just up to the reader's interpretation. I suggest including more description and detail to make it all more emotional - especially more important moments like when the mother and father die, or when the sunflower itself dies.
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