Is this how you introduce shipping?

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Yeah so this is the beginning of that new fanfic I've been talking about.

Is this... Is this how you write ships? Does this look right to you guys? This is literally the introduction to the story.

Please, please, please give me some feedback! This is my first time writing ships and I want it to be good!

Please, please, please give me some feedback! This is my first time writing ships and I want it to be good!

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