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Hi Everyone, 

I'm kind of frustrated, I love this story but I have hit a wall I didn't want there to really be a mystery but have written about it and in the process have lost the end goal of how I wanted the story to go. 

I apologize if the story seems dull or dying out or repetitive or at least that's how I feel about it right now.  the goal was to meet a sexy man in an older life of women, mom, career lady, etc and then play that out, it wasn't to save the world or become a werewolf or something. it was just a love novel and the crazy things of love. and hopefully a good ending. 

I have ended in mine, but that little things have been taking from my end game. So, I may be revising a few chapters or at least the last 2 to see if I can't redirect the story and or plot. 

I simply forgot what I wanted it to play out as and now feel blank when I write. so please bear with me Im working on trying to make sure this has a plot, suspense, and good end. BUT I am new to writing. I hope I haven't lost any of you reading this. 

Please leave me comments on how it's going the feedback really helps. I would hate to pause the book or end it where it is because I can't write it better then what I have. 

ANYWAY. THANK YOU ALL FOR READING. 

MARIA

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