True Alpha (Jikook)

Chapter 30

A/N- Okay so this is just sad, I forgot most of my plot and had to invest an entire day in just skimming through. *sigh*. (why is my story so long?)

Anyway, I will try to be consistent with my updates next time. And I see a lot happened while I was gone. Jikook were wilding, BTS was being mobbed by celebrities and our fandom was going through it after rose bowl as usual. And i missed it all. Yeah~ lmao.

And I also got my first criticism from one of my readers, what she basically said - 

1) Jikook don't have that much development and are introduced too late

2) The stretched and long narrative of the fic is boring with too much details not really necessary for a jikook fic. For example, there was no need to explain how a stucco work looks like.

3) All I did was show off JK's power

4) And there seems to be a lack of jikook overall so many readers must have left it half way

I kinda get where she is coming from, I agree with most of what she said but I also am not gonna change my story now. She did say the story was written nicely and she loved the details but it was just too much for a jikook fic. And yes it is so long that readers may have gotten bored...

1) Jikook do have development but one would have to hang on because this story is still not over and if there are any doubts regarding them, then you will know it in later chapters. I mean JK seems to be familiar with Jimin and doesn't even question the fast attraction they both seem to have. There is a reason for that.

And they are introduced late because I wanted to build up suspense and a little bit of character introduction was needed before the actual plot could start.

2) The reason why this story seems so long is because I wanted it to be long and I wanted it to have more than just jikook. So yes it might seem too detailed but that's just how I want my readers to picture it. I know that I don't need to specify the wall colour or window detail but as an architecture student and a writer I feel the need to have a visual which my readers can relate to. Setting up a background is necessary according to my concept as a story is like a movie, with description and details which a reader can envision. And especially when it is a fictional fic, you need to add details to fully make up for it's structure that can be pictured.

3) JK is the main character and so is Jimin but I needed the readers to know just how powerful JK is. And I also wanted to convey his struggles to the readers. Because in the end the plot and the story is based on that. Also, I love to show off JK, kekeke~ 

4) Not every reader likes what I write and not everyone agrees, but I think there is enough jikook interaction until now and I succeeded in writing what I wanted. In later chapter from here, you will see a major change. Because the story was still half baked and I deliberately wrote what you read. 

And even if readers left half way, I cannot make them come back. Even I leave many fics half way because I don't like them, but many in my place do. I don't like much angst, while the others do. I am those types who like longer fics, I like extra. That is why my writing is like that. 

Overall I would like to apologize if readers aren't satisfied but if you like my fic, I am blessed :)) I have also received so many positive comments, I feel so encouraged.

And I love you my readers, I am thankful for the constructive criticism and your devotion to my fic. Take all my purple uwus and hearts <3 <3