Tris's POV
My eyes flutter open and what I see is a room that has gold floors, ceiling, and walls. Gathered around me are familiar faces who have died for me: my mother, father, Will, who I shot, Lynn, and Marlene, who i didn't save because the others were too young to die. "Am I dying? Is it my time?" I ask.
My mom answers,"No, Beatrice, God doesn't want you to leave Tobias, your true love. Go back and kill that traitor, David!"
The room disappears along with my friends, mother, and father. I now see David glaring at my "dead" body. I stand up. David says something that sounds like "That's impossible." He aims his gun at me and shoots. I figure that I would feel the same stinging pain in my stomach, but I didn't. I could not believe my eyes. The bullet bounced off my body and into David's heart. I say a silent prayer to Mom and then rush out of the room.
I see Caleb and he looks stunned. He races over to me and hugs me tightly. He whispers, "Thank God you're alive, Tris. I guess I don't have to face your scary boyfriend."
I laugh. "You know, if you just spent time with him, you might like him. Then you don't have to go into big brother mode. And we're not finished yet. Give me a gun." He hands me one and I walk over to the room where David is. I put the gun to his head and shoot him about five times just to make sure he's dead. Then i go back to Caleb and we wait outside for Tobias. I want to be the first person he sees when he comes back from giving memory serum to one of his parents. I hope it's Evelyn. I don't want to look at a loving father version of Marcus and then see a mean dad whipping Tobias with his belt.
After a while, Caleb asks me,"So...what happened in there?"
"Well," I answer,"I saw Mom and Dad. I think I went to heaven and saw them. They looked happy, dressed in white, and they were in a room made of gold along with everyone who died for me." I pause for a moment. "She said that Tobias is my true love...that God wanted me to be with him."
Caleb thought about this for a moment. "If that's true, then i guess I'll give him a chance....But if he touches you, he can be sure that he will get it." I nod. Just then, a car pulls up. The door opens and I see him. Tobias is here. I run to him and he runs to me. We embrace each other and he kisses me. It is the most passionate kiss I have ever had. His touch comforts me and it relieves me of all the guilt I had when seeing my parents and friends in the gold room. He gets a glance at Caleb who has now walked up to us.
"I thought you were resetting the memory serum!" he shouts angrily. I calm him down and tell him of the day's experiences. He scolds me. "You could've died, Tris. Didn't you think of me? How it would affect me?"
"Yes, I did." I assure him soothingly. "I love you and i will never leave you. Come on, let's go." I lead him inside so he can tell me about his day.
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Happily Ever After
FanfictionWhat would happen if Tris didn't die? find out in this rewrite of the ending of allegiant