"Good morning Avi." Neil chirped. His wife just woke up from her deep slumber and was rubbing her eyes, too cute to not be acknowledged.
"I like it when you're up." He said honestly, kissing her cheek, avoiding the pipe that ran around it. He would have a difficult time controlling Avni if she saw it.
"Why? So that you're ensured that I didn't die off in my sleep?" Avni chuckled and hugged her personal teddy: Neil.
"Shut up!" Neil said playfully but meant it. Really. He didn't like it when she said all that. He feared the accomplishment.
"Okay, okay. Neil my legs are so stiff. I wanna have a walk in the garden. Please!" Avni said, sat with her knees touching the bed and hugged him. Neil's facial muscles tightened as her oxygen pipe was stretched from the cylinder. She shouldn't know.
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Looks like Neil isn't happy. I just fainted like anything and he's worried because of me.. I'll make him happy. Avni, you have to.
"Oohh by the way boyfriend, are we engaged?" She broke apart and stared at his hands. "I didn't know you were naughty too." Neil grinned and picked her up in his strong arms, listening to the best music ever: her giggles.
"Neil chodo mujhe!" Avni said after a while, released herself and was about to run. She was pulled back pretty abruptly, not by Neil, but by the pipe. Cold sweat broke out on his face, the hair on his neck rose.
Covering up was the only option left so before Avni could turn, Neil grabbed her by arm and pulled her towards him, knocking the air out of her lungs.
"Ouch Neil, your chest is too hard!" Avni complained, distancing herself away. "Sorry." Neil said and tried to grin. Exception: it didn't look like he was grinning.
"What pulled me?" Avni asked trying to look behind Neil but he blocked her view.
"It was me." He lied. "No. Something around my nose wa-"
And then it struck her. She touched the area around her nostrils and felt something else which was definitely not her skin. Neil held her hands but she passed him a look, fear.
She got up, stepped back to see the thing stretched. A pipe was there, whose source was behind the side set drawer of the bed. She pushed it away, scared to witness what she was expecting.
And then she saw it. She staggered and fell to the the floor, too ashamed and scared to admit that the dream she saw yesterday was nonetheless, going to be true. Whenever they would have a child, she would be abnormal just like her.
"I..I ca...can do wi.. without it." She whispered, panting. There were chills in her body that shook her as she shakingly removed the pipe around her nose and threw it.
"Avni you've to wear this please." Neil said, wiping her tears and held her cold arms with his warm hands. "I don't need this." She said, more firmly this time.
"You do! Avni look at me-"
"No Neil! See I'm okay without it, I can't manage...I...if..ou..our child..." Avni tried hard to control herself and ran into the bathroom, closed the door and cried.
"FINE THEN! IM NOT HAVING A CHILD IF YOU'RE GOING TO ACT LIKE THIS AVNI!" Neil yelled, slamming the door with his hand. She was not supposed to be without the cylinder.
He was irked by her behaviour and thought Neela Ma was the best to explain it to her.
"Yes Neil?"
"Ma aap aajao please. Samjhado usey please ma. She is not listening to me at all! S.. she's worsening her health Ma!" Neil broke into a gibberish account.
"I am not at home Neil. Call Ashish. Hai to vo apni baap ki beti hee na. I know he's hopeless in your eyes but...You know what I mean." Neela spoke.
He called Ashish albeit he was against it and asked him to explain her.
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"Superstar, sit. And wear this." Ashish gave her, her nasal cannula but she threw it away from his hands.
"I won't wear this!" Avni panted heavily but managed to yell.
"Why?"
"This makes me abnormal!" She yelled again. "Avni it doesn't-" Neil picked it up from the floor and sat next to her.
"Okay, tell me what happened, okay." Ashish intervened.
"Ask him! Why did he hide that I'm on this!" Avni yelled, yet again, worsening her breathing pattern.
"Because-"
"Yeah, because I an seemingly abnormal in that. And he said he didn't want to have a child with....with me." Avni sobbed.
"Okay that's not how I meant it." Neil clarified.
Women.
"Avni this doesn't make you abnormal bache..And the doctor said you'd be fine." Ashish held her cheeks gently and stared at her. "Dad but..please think na...Mujhe nahi chahiye ye. Neil I don't want you to feel that..mai..hamara.."
"Avni you need to understand that..You're beautiful with your Flaws. And let's say that..okay maybe our child turns out to have an inherent lung disorder, then what? So what? That would still be our child! And I'll love her more than anyone could! Why don't you understand it Avni? Samjhate samjhate thak gaya tumhe you're perfect when you are being you and not when you try to overcome your flaws. You know what, you're still not out from the jail. Chahe kitne mahino pehle tum jail se release ho gayi ho, par sach ye hai Avni, you've made your own jail and you're not ready to leave it. I tried so hard to make you leave your past, your insecurities, your imperfections, everything behind. When are you going to do this? And trust me this Nasal Cannula looks good on you. Not that I want you to wear this but yeah, I'll make get out of it, hell soon." Neil finished and made her wear it finally.
Her breathing eased, not due to the supply of tbe oxygen but by his words.
"And wifey, I'd love to have kids with you." Neil hugged her.
"Just two are fine." Ashish said, smiling awkwardly.
"But I still don't want it." She said pointing at her cylinder. Neil blinked his eyes in assurance.
Maybe, he did succeed in making her real jail into a cocoon.
Avni ko finally udna sikha diya.
~The End~
Here it ends, I can try for an epilogue so the books end on an even note ( chapter 60)
Much love to everyone!
Especially ZaraSajad, you were the first one to vote and comment and without that, I wouldn't have written this book till here. Much love, love! 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
And I hope, I finally gave justice to some of the easy going things to the jail track.
Avni didn't go easy with Neil [✓]
Avni had the wedding recreated[✓]
Avni fought the domestic problem [✓]
Avni was financially independent [✓]
Avni was captured with past [✓]
Neil taught her to swim above it[✓]
Neil recreated her past, for her [✓]
Neil made her accept her[✓]
AvNeil, in all senses, are together [✓]
AvNeil Jail Track FF - [✓]
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