another chance

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book - another chance

author - Mamree

reviewer - teenager_scribbles

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review

cover -

the cover was good but not really very eye catchy, the title was not clearly visible and so was the name of the author. the pictures used in the coverer really good spoke a lot about how the story could be- revenge, romance, suspicion and thriller all mixed.


blurb -

the blurb was fabulous! but you could have added a few more sentences to it, like a few mysterious ones, thrilling just to add the much needed thrill to the story. also maybe a few lines about heartache or maybe some quotes would perhaps give a better look out to it.


plot -

the plot was something that was very well thought of and imagined. well done there!

 you had sketched out the entire thing beautifully and also the past and the present were blended so beautifully together that it was simply just wow to see the contrasts and the differences of all those six years.

 the next thing that i liked was your thoughts- like showing both arnav and khushi were tortured and physically abused or that the blaze of the fire of revenge that was burning inside khushi showed that you are a writer who believes in reality and tried to blend reality with fiction.

arnav's way of trying to setback khushi, the pain he too was suffering and going through,khushi's pain, the fire of revenge inside her, the nightmares, the care that she still had for arnav was all penned down with so much of heartfelt emotions that i as a reader could place myself in his shoes. 

now coming to the other characters, the side characters all of them had also essayed their role nicely and reached upto the expectations.


character sketch -

the characters were very well thought of and penned down, kudos to your power of imagination.

the emotions felt by every character be it the protagonists or the others were all portrayed so beautifully that it was simply just fab!!!



conclusion -

really have nothing much to say, you have penned down the book amazingly and i have loved it. it was pure general fiction and everyone who loves to read reality mixed with thrill, romance and mystery will love the book for sure.

overall amazing book.



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