The Gloss Reviews

Impossible love

Author - _justloveharry_33
Book name - Impossible love
Reviewer - Tanyamalhotra22

Review

Cover :-

All the readers first look for the cover and then decide whether to read it or not . For me , in the case of this book I felt you need to work on your cover . Its just a picture of them three with the title In the middle that too with a font that isnt clear .

So , please I kindly request you to get it changed .

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Blurb/prologue :-

The blurb was quite interesting . It gave a character sketch of avneet and her life , also the intro of a mysterious character shaheer .

The questions which were asked made me really curious to know what the book is about .

Good job on that .

But , there Wasn't a prologue ?!
You Just had a cast list with their pictures posted . You could have atleast mentioned their characterization along with it or could have placed a scene from any one of your chapters in the book to make your readers curious .

I hope you will make one in the future .

Plot / story development :-

The plot was very unusual and rare . At first , it gave me the typical crush-love story type but it wasn't one .

Since , I had psychology as one of my subject , I can very well understand the pace of the story and the way it was carried around .

There arent many stories like this dealing about psychological aspects especially not a fanfiction .

I like how you centered the theme of 'dissociative Identity' also called multiple personality . 
The initial chapters were confusing about what was going on , but later on towards the end it somehow gave an idea on what it was about  .

Good job on that .

But the main problem is , the portrayal of characters or the scenes werent clear .
The dialogues and the way it was presented wasnt upto the mark .

It was too confusing at the beginning and it only cleared out after a certain parts .
If the initial chapters arent good , the readers will most likely lose interest .

If you have time , make sure to edit it or  re-write initial chapters properly .

Also the ending , now that's a major problem . You just abruptly put a end to the story which just unfolded .

We were just getting to know the history of anamika , shashi and madhiha and suddenly , the story just comes to the end with the psychiatrist talking about the disorder .

That's all ?
I mean that's not how you end it .

Readers will more likely get angry while reading this ending . The suspense you have kept throughout the story just disappears in the end .