Book Title - Manan - An Epic Love Saga
Author - radhika_20
Reviewer - RuVineet
Review - A love story can be sweet, soft,happy or sad as per the conditions applied. The title of the story is interesting. The character aesthetics in the beginning is interesting. I really liked all the characters, and I also liked the way you made symbols or say acronyms of the names.
The storyline seems simple in the beginning, I love the family moments of both the families. The friendship bond is beautifully depicted. The chapters are short and nice.
I noticed that the author has used POV style, but the content is less in it. You can write more in the character POV. It will emphasize your writing and readers interest as well.
Also, as I already said in my comments, that use full names while writing , even if it is in script form. You can use nicknames in the conversation, though. Full names will make your writing impressive. It's the thing,that I felt is distracting, since it is hard for the readers to understand who come from outside the fandom. Please try changing your style.
Overall, a good job..
Well done!
Rating - 3/5
Dear author, I hope you found the review useful.
Thanks,
RuVineet{Roohi}
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