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A Storm on the Mountain

Author- amaranthinepoetry

Book- A Storm on the Mountain

Reviewer- polymath_land

Review

Title

The title is just good. But it was too long. However, the plot is related to the title, I agree with that. You could have done much better with the title in a short way. I was not attracted to the title. It should be attractive. So, I suggest try to create a new creative title. It's just my view.

Cover

The cover is not attractive at all, even though it's quite apt to the plot. Font used is too common to be attractive. The picture of Mountain is less impressive.

I suggest change the cover immediately. It's a kind of mysterious story and the cover didn't give any hint of the word 'Mystery'.

Blurb

Blurb is good. Good job at it. It does give me a lifestyle of Anav and the mysterious plot you have stored for the readers. Impressive.

Plot

The plot is not exactly a new one but it's creative. You are carrying out the plot quite well. Good job at it. It was not too slow, not too fast either. It's at a normal pace.

Personally, I really like the plot and the way you are carrying it out. No negative points here.

Character Development

Aanav's character is the major one here, according to me. I like the way you are developing the character and its attributes. The pace is normal. I'm impressed with this part. Continue the good work.

Narration-

Well, coming to Narration. Do I need to say anything? Absolutely, No.

Because the Narration is too good and attractive. What I liked the most in your story, is your way of Narrating the story. I felt as it was happening in front of me. Good Job! Keep it up!

Grammatical Errors-

I found nothing major as Errors in Grammar. Just two or three. I found no typos too. It was all good. Also, your vocabulary is quite good. But you can do better in vocabulary. Already, you are good at words. It's just that, you could have used better words here and there. Like, using 'gazing' is better than just 'looking'.

Hope you understood!

Positive points-

Blurb
Plot
Character Development
Narration
Grammar

Negative points-

Title
Cover

The book is a good read. The one who likes something as mysterious can read the book. Keep up the good work.

Note-

Please don't mind if you found me rude/harsh. It is for you to become a little better as a writer.

Hope this review helps you! I'll be glad if it does.

All the best for your future works.

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