Book: God Complex
Author: DelilahKhadaroo
Reviewer: Praahi
About the book:
"One day, Liliana Rosebay was a normal sixteen-year old, prowling the streets of New Orleans. The next day, her mother was murdered right in front of her.
Imagine her surprise at being thrown into a world she never dreamed could exist. Celestials called Manifestations were the abstract 'manifestation' of earthly emotions and their children were gifted with the ability to manipulate these emotions.
She joins forces with her newly discovered cousin, Zandra Simmons, whose mother was killed by the same woman who killed her own mother. In order to get the revenge they thirst for, Liliana must leave her old life behind and join the royally sanctioned mission to draw out her mother's killer.If she gives up, a killer and a terrorist walks free.If she gets her revenge, how many of her new friends will die in the process?Will the quest she journeys on lead to her doom?I liked this description a lot...So, didn't want to spoil it by putting it in my words"The story is divided into three parts and is an ongoing story.
Review:
- To start with, the plot is quite interesting and gripping. The concept is unique with angels, Gods and celestials. Must appreciate the imagination of the author.
- I tried a lot to find any errors but the grammar and the tense was perfect all throughout the story. I loved your choice of words and must say great usage of vocabulary.
- Prologue is perfect just as it has to be...giving out only necessary details without revealing much.
- Though after reading the amazing story, I felt little disappointed with the cover and title...though the title is apt for the story, something more catchy and attractive would have caught reader's attention as cover is the first thing that is visible to a reader.
- Introducing the characters upfront would have been good because when there are many characters, there is a high chance of confusion...so a small introduction regarding who is whom, not revealing much would have made the readers acquainted with the names. This is just a suggestion though.
Overall, this story is a complete package of suspense and thrill. I would recommend this story to all the fantasy lovers.
All I want to say is DelilahKhadaroo you are doing an amazing job, keep writing and all the best for your future projects. I was really happy reading your story which didn't have any typos or spelling mistakes.
Thank you,
Praahi
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