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Hi guys, I was just going through my old stories. So this book was written in 2014, wow four years ago! I was 12 then, so my writings now are much better and this story in my opinion is very badly written. Sadly, I will not be rewriting anything for this, but I won't delete it either. I want to focus more on actual books that aren't fanfictions, but I would be very grateful if you guys looked at some of my newer things. Thank you!
xxAshleigh
Oh, and enjoy the story!
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Okay here we go. 4th story on here. I will update as much as possible.
All rights reserved for Veronica Roth. Except the plot.
Tris POV
I woke up and felt a little sick. I pushed it aside and got dressed for school. I put on a gray sweater with pink, white, and gray leggings, a light pink scarf and pink boots with gray earrings. (At beginning of chapter.) I curled my hair and grabbed my phone. I went downstairs and saw my mom making eggs. I grab a plate, made some toast and got some eggs.
As I'm buttering my toast, Caleb comes downstairs. "Hey mom. Beatrice." He acts all nice now, but treats me meanly at school. His friends always laugh and make fun of me. I don't have any friends. I was the one whose friends moved away. Now I'm all alone. I don't care though, who needs them.
"Mom, I'm working tonight until 5."
"Okay, sweetie. That's fine." I smile in return. Caleb grabs a plate and we start eating. My dad had already left for work.
Four POV
I wake up again for another day at school. I take a quick shower, and get dressed in a simple outfit. Dark jeans and a black shirt. I go to my kitchen and see a note from my father.
Tobias,
I won't be home until late tonight. No parties. Try not to get in trouble
-Dad
I put the note away, and get some cereal for breakfast. He doesn't trust me. I wouldn't either. I decide to listen for once, and grab my backpack. I put on my converse and start my drive to school. I have a white mustang.
Tris POV
After eating breakfast, I went back upstairs to apply a little makeup. I put on light pink lip gloss, and a light pink eyeshadow. I grabbed my NorthFace jacket off my bed along with my backpack.
Just as I was about to leave, I started feeling sharp pains in my chest. I pushed it aside, even though I knew what it was. I didn't tell anyone. My cancer was coming back. I left my room and a single tear fell down my face.
How'd you like it. Do you want more updates? Tell me whatcha think.
Starting date: December 27, 2014
Ending date: January 25, 2015
xxAshleigh
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