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Example :- (I haven't written this judging a book. This is just an example.)
Cover :- 3/5 The cover is good but can be better. I would suggest you to request a cover in a cover shop available on Wattpad.
Title :- 5/5 The title looks perfect. Readers can get a clear rough image about what the story is going to be. Very good for it.
Description :- 2/5 The description is a bit short. You can try adding some scene or dialogues from the story, to add a bit of excitement in it. I guess you make the blurb a bit long.
First impression :- 8/10 I like the way you introduce your characters, like each and every character were given their own flaws and traits. I personally like characters which seem real. So a very good job in plotting their nature. The first five chapters were very well written. If I was a reader, who came across your book accidentally, I would have read the whole book in a day. It's so intriguing.
Plot :- 7.5/10 The plot could have been better. But the way you have made a bit of differences, the plot looks very good now. The only thing where the plot lacked, was their family being a very typical unrealistic family. Of course not every family is like them, both of their family's looked the same. Their nature was the same so I was sometimes going back to Characters chapter to remember who is the family member of whose. Otherwise the plot looks good.
Grammar :- 1.5/5 Please pay attention to your grammatical errors. The first few chapters were perfect but I don't know how you started making so many mistakes that it was very hard for me to not to comment anything harsh. Please try editing your book or otherwise give your book for editing to a community who does this job too. Please try editing your book or otherwise give your book for editing to a community who also have editors, to edit the books. Trust me, no one loves to read a book though the plot may be good but the grammatical errors over power your plot.
Character development :- 9/10
Personal opinion :- I usually love when the character development is slow and goes smooth. I hate when authors just randomly put anything anywhere.
As a judge :- It was very well done. We can get a brief note about how the character is, how he/she is with his/her friends, family members, colleagues, you have shown very well. Good job!
Writing style :- 4/5
Loved your writing style. It's very easy to know who is doing what, some authors make things messy by putting dialogues in one para, in which someone's emotional turmoil is also described. But in your case that was nowhere to be seen. Loved that!
Length of chapters :- 5/5 I like short chapters but they should be worth the title. Like when we read "Their Confession" we get a rough image that someone or the other is going to confess something. I loved your chapter's titles too, very crazy and excellent. The chapters had everything it should have.
Overall impression :- 10/15 2 marks deducted for grammar. 3 for the plot which could have been more good. Overall I liked reading & judging your book. The importance of main leads didn't get distracted, which I liked. There were a few chapters in which you mentioned some social matters. I loved that. I think every book at least has some social matters to get discussed in a unique way. Kudos for that! Because books like this also can preach so many things.
I would first suggest the writer unpublish the book and edit the grammar errors, then it should be available to readers because you may lose many readers if you don't edit the book.
Pay attention to English and grammar. Make supportings too a bit real and not clichè. Overall the book is amazing!
Total :- 59/75
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Judging Example for OS/TS :-
(Haven't written this judging any OS. Just an example.)
Cover : 5/5 Perfect. It's beautiful, the graphic designer have put every effort in it. It's totally relevant with the title of this OS.
Title : 5/5 I loved the title. I got a rough image of the story line on which you're gonna write this OS.
Description/Blurb : 1/5 Not much. You have just wrote the title and peep in to read it. That's it? You can also write some description about how it is going to be. I know it's not a story but still.
Length (did it covered everything it should have?) : 9/10 The OS covered everything. Like starting from their present, to their past, to their thoughts on future. It had everything! Great job I loved this.
Plot & Storyline : 10/10 The plot was such a sensitive topic. I love to read books on such sensitive topics. Go on writing such books & OS. Whether it was his consoling her, to her fighting strong it was just perfect.
Grammar : 4/5 There are some very minor grammatical errors. But they can be edited and become perfect.
Overall impression : 8/10 Please change the blurb it's annoying that such a beautiful concept can lack in readers just because of it's blurb. Otherwise it's beautiful! I loved it totally.
