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Cover - 1.5/5 Your cover is not matching your story a bit. As it's a doctor's love story so the cover should have some hospital effects and your username is also not there. So I would suggest ordering a new cover from a graphic shop.
Title - 3.5/5 Your title is nice but you can change it for a better title. The title initially gives the view of the story but as we read further there is mystery... So you can change in better.
Description/Blurb - 5/5 Your description is awesome. If I was a reader than by reading only blurb my curiosity of reading the story is very much.
First impression - 6/10 I had found that the story is a normal story of two classmates who want to be doctors and eventually fall for each other...as I read in many books.
Plot - 7/10 The plot in the beginning looks not so interesting but when the mystery part comes it becomes very interesting...
Grammar - 3.5/5 Your grammar is good. There are few grammatical errors and typo mistakes. Otherwise, it is perfect.
Character development - 6/10 Personal opinion- I usually love when character development is slow...but in your case character development is very fast
As a judge- In starting the character development is very fast. Please make character development slow and smooth and make supporting real.
Writing Style - 3.5/5 Your writing style is nice. It is very easy to understand the reader... but in certain situations someone inner turmoil is not described.
Length of chapters - 5/5 The chapters are short and contain all the things which should have... I usually love short chapters.
Overall Impression - 12/15 Three marks deducted for the starting plot which could have better...
Overall I liked reading and judging your book.
I would suggest the writer to certain changes to starting chapters. Because the first impression is the last impression. Your story is awesome but the starting chapters are boring.
Please change starting chapters, make the story flow slow and smooth... Make the supporting bit real. Overall the book is amazing.
