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Cover- 4/5 Cover is nice and the font and style by which you wrote title is also good. Picture used is good and it shows naughty nature but it's little dull. Can be changed by editing the effect used but it's not required though.
Title- 5/5 Title is apt for this story and really interesting. It catches the attention of reader and makes a great suspense,"My Weekend Boyfriend" that how this can happen? Boyfriend is only for weekend or something else. It creates a urge to read and know what's it's about. Personally this title caught my attention and made me go and peep inside story.
Description/Blurb- 4/5 Description contains a scene from the story which tells the chemistry of the pair and creates interest to read. You very wittingly wrote a scene instead of writing concept or some information about the story making a suspense about it and leaves with the same question to explore while reading the story that what's the deal with boyfriend for limited period of time.
First impression (After reading 5 chapters)- 9/10 Reading first five chapters made me (and readers must be also) glued to this story to read all parts in one go. You wrote it in a way that developed interest to this story and wanting to know what will happen next.
Plot 9/10 Well plot is really interesting like some movie. Bela's sister invited her with her boyfriend and she accepted it knowing she don't have one but she very cleverly put it as a condition in front of a popular boy of college Mahir to act like her boyfriend for weekend in exchange of help in his project but after spending time they really fall for each other. It's a super story but it would be better if you would have shown a little more together time of behir as friends together or when Mahir was persuading Bela to accept her real feelings for him. As a writer you wrote all things to point but from the view of readers little more was required as readers wanted to see more. And same thing in the end when Mahir proposed her it would have been better if you would have shown little more details or shown little more.
Grammar- 4/5 Your grammar is good. There were little mistakes but not very big.
Character development- 9/10 Development of all the characters were smooth. Bela was a studious and introvert girl who has a wrong perception about herself due to some bad incident and Mahir who was a popular boy changed it and the same goes with Mahir who was not serious, fell in love after spending time with a simple girl for real.
It would have been better if you would have shown a little more bond between Juhi and Bela. It was like she doesn't know what's happening in her sister's life for real. But she did a great job by inviting her and because of her, Bela and Mahir became behir.
