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Cover- 4/5 The cover is nice. The scene of an university in background gives an rough idea about the content of the story,but I believe it can be more better in quality and colour combinations.
Title- 5/5 The title perfectly suits the story.It gives an guess that the story is about revenge and enimity with a tinge of fun.
Description- 3/5 The description is okay but still it needs a bit modification .It's a bit short,you can try to add some dialogues or some quotes to make it more interesting.
First impressions- 7/10 The first chapter is an character sketch . Though it was explained properly but it had many characters introduced at the same time and their role in the story too,so since the beginning of te story the readers had an clear idea of who are the positive character and who are the negative ones,thus ending the suspense.
Plot- 8/10 I personally liked the plot very much,it was not like those typical ones but a unique one,the contact signed by Anika and following Shivaay's stupid orders were fun to read.
Grammer- 5/5 There were hardly any grammar mistake,it seemed like the writer had done a hard work in editing the chapters.
Character Development- 8/10 The character development was quite good.From Shivaay being a careless boy to how he started developing feelings for Anika,being jealous of his own childhood friend.
Personal opinion:- I simply loved the book but the thing that I would like to mention is try to update in an regular basis.
As a judge:- It was a nice piece of writing but still needs some modifications at some points,but the plot is very much liked by me.
Writing style- 3/5 I liked your writing style ,it was simple but good.
Length of chapters - 3/5 The chapters covered the title but still some of them were short while some of them were long,try to maintain the same length.
Overall impression- 13/15 YOU'RE SO DEAD!!MR.SSO!! this title suited very much with the plot,the plot was also good,the typical things that happen in an school/college were mentioned like a secret place for Shivomru,a crush, scoldings of teachers, principal and all.
