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The cover is good but it can be more clear and better.
TITLE (5/5)
the title is perfect it gives a rough idea about the story how it is going to be.
DESCRIPTION (3.5/5)
ok so you need to work on the description as it's a bit short you can add some scenes or something like that to spice up the interest of the readers.
GRAMMAR (3.5/5)
You need to pay attention on your grammar and typing errors. You can try reviewing your chapters after writing to correct your errors.
LENGTH (5/5)
ok so the length of your chapters are perfectly fine.
FIRST IMPRESSION (6.5/10)
I found out the story is common I mean the arrange marriage things they meet and fall in love as I read it in many books.
PLOT (7/10)
The plot is common as I have read many arrange marriage Stories. The start is not so interesting so it may make reader excitement go down.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (8.5/10)
The character development is perfectly fine I mean not too much fast not that much slow the thing which I like.
WRITING STYLE (3/5)
Your writing style is good. I liked it and it's understandable. You just need to focus on certain character povs.
OVERALL IMPRESSION (12.5/15)
I liked the story but deducted marks due to the starting of chapters if you change them a bit it can be better.
Overall I enjoyed.
AS A JUDGE
I would suggest that you should work on your type of errors and I make some changes in introduction of the main characters it would be really great if you do so otherwise it makes the start of the book borning. Also if you can add a scene if two in description it would be really great.
