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1. Title : 4.5 / 5 The title is an interesting one .
2. Cover : 4.5 / 5 The edit is very nice . The cover is really very attractive and beautiful . It is clearly visible that author had done hard work for the cover .
3. Blurb : 1.5 / 5 No blurb is given for the story . The blurb is saying only that it is a behir story . Which is clearly visible in cover also . You should have given a little idea of the story in the blurb . So that readers try to give your story a chance . See , blurb is a place where you can attract a reader towards your story and make them hook to the story . So , please write a interesting blurb for the story .
4. First impression : 4.5 / 10
5. Character sketch / character development : 5 / 10 You messed up behir character in the first part only . After knowing each other from college days , they are behaving like strangers and in second part , they proposes each other . Like seriously . You changed their character traits in starting only .
6. Plot : 5 / 10 The plot you have chosen is very ordinary and confusing one . Do you have any idea like what are you trying to portray in your story . In the very first part , they introduce each other like they are meeting for the first time and later you discloses that both love each other from college days . If they are secretly in love with each other than they can behave like college mates , like friends but they behave like strangers . You should have focused on the storyline too .
7. Grammar : 3 / 5 There is an immense use of ellipsis and there are quite punctuation mistakes as well . Avoid using emojis in the story and there is some grammar mistakes as well . Avoid using short forms like ( you - u , btw - between ) use full words .
8. Writing style : 3 / 5 A lot of use of ellipsis and emojis .
9. Length of chapters ; 3 / 5 You need to elongate the chapters a little . In my opinion , you went too fast in the starting . But got a nice pace later .
10. Overall : 9 / 15 . The plot you have chosen is not interesting but it is not boring too . You need to edit your starting chaptes . You can elongate them and republish them . So , the readers will not get confuse .
