Twinkling Awards 2020 || ✔

✨Rikara - @EATABLES✨

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These judgements were sent to us on 24/08/2020.

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1. My Rikara Dabbles by Piyali7870

a) Cover (3/5)- The cover is good & gives a cute impression of what can be
expected from this couple. But I would suggest that it would be better
if you could request for a cover from a cover shop in Wattpad.

b) Title (5/5)- The title is perfect.

c) Description(4/5)- It is really heartwarming, but I would suggest it that, it can be made a little.more shorter to give it a touch of professionalism.

d) First Impression( 8/10)- Character and plots ate always different from
each other, sixth various concepts & ideas..which is very impressive
and instills curiosity and interest in the readers.

e) Plots ( 9/10) - Very impressive and interesting.

f) Grammar ( 4/5)- very negligible errors but which can be taken
category of!

g) Character Development( 9/10)- Excellent! ( Opinion as a judge and
also personal)

h) Length of Chapters (5/5)- You have already mentioned it perfectly in
the blurb as to what word limits can be expected, and it has been
noticed that it was taken care!

i) Writing style (4/5)- Impressive!

j) Overall impression- (14/15)

TOTAL-( 65 /75)

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2. When I fell in love by Piyali7870

a) Cover (4/5) - Perfect!

b) Title(4/5)- Apt for the plot.

c) Description(3/5)- The format is very interesting, but I would suggest you to only include any one out of the three scenes as the blurb to make it look more professional!

d) First Impression(8/10)- We were curious as to how will Gauri realise her feelings, and everything went so natural that ,
Anika's cuoid role was never realised until in the end! That was Fabulous.

e) Plot (8/10)- Impressive!

f) Grammar (4/5) - only negligible and small errors.

g) Character Development (9/10)- Progressive & Impressive!

h) Writing style(4/5)- One suggestion is that pls use words to describe numbers rather than writing them in the typical
numerical form, for eg: write one as 'one' and not as 1. Further, pls go through the usage of the Hindi word 'na' towards the
end...

i) Length of chapters (5/5)- Perfect!

j) Overall Impression ( 13/15)- its very impressive & interesting.

TOTAL- (62/75)

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3. Drabble Series: Bawri by Piyali7870

Cover(3/5)- Cover is good but I would suggest you to request for a cover in any cobershop in wattpad!

Title(5/5)- Quite a catchy one.

Description(5/5)- Perfect!

First impression (8/10)- I had a heartbreak thinking Omkara had a girlfriend, but the way you handled it otherwise was intriguing.

Plot (9/10)- Very interesting & impressive.. I am quite curious as the story is still 'On'.

Grammar (4/5)- Negligible errors here and there.

Character Development (9/10)- Till now its progressive and interesting!

Writing Style(4/5)- impressive!

Length of chapters(3/5)- Pls make it a little more longer.

Overall Impression (12/15)- Very Good!

TOTAL: (62/75)

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These were all Piyali7870 's works, but you got the highest score for "My Rikara Drabbles"